Evaluate my Initial Footage

Framing- The difference between these two shots is that in the original shot, the frame is showing the model's knees, whereas in our shot the model's knees are not in the frame. I think the professional shot is more successful, because they would have spent more time filming the shot, whereas we only did it one or two times. 
Lighting- The lightning does not really work, as you cannot see the model's face properly. Also, the colours of the top and skirt are supposed to be seen, whereas on this shot they are blending in together. We did not try to do any special set up, we just decided to use the lighting that was in shot location. Due to the lights, we can see the reflecting of the classes in the background. 
Mise en scene- The skirt choice was similar to the original shot, but we could have had the model wear a checked shirt to match the model in the original shot. 
Camera- in our shots we used a hand-held camera. In our shot it looks like the shot was not filmed on an eye level, it almost looks like the model is looking down a bit. 
Actors- the actor worked well while doing the shot.